Almost done!

Two or three more posts and I am done with my story. How friggin cool is that? I've never written anything in this length before and even though it sucks big time, I am proud of finishing it. I'm finishing a story!!! *grins*

There's a second part that I'm working on. It's much darker than the first because my heroine has gone through a lot and she isn't the sweet girl she used to be.
I mean, she leaves her man -- cuz she's stupid -- claiming she has to be alone for a little while, to clear her thoughts. She's been having dreams and nightmares and they all end up with Kyp dying if she stays.

Wanting to be safe than sorry, while he's out on a mission, she simply writes him a note and leaves. For the next five years, they hear nothing of each other.

Now I'm guessing if Kyp Durron were in love, he would do almost anything for this person. He would kill for this person, he would die for this person. He's lost so much in his life that he might even cling a little bit too much.
And having Liz leave him this way, would be a blow. And he would be pissed.

Of course he tried to talk out their differences but Liz would never say what was bothering her. She would close up completely, fearing that he would know about the dreams and do something about it. But what if they weren't just dreams? What if they were visions? Because all her dreams that felt real, were real.

Thank you, Force.

So five years later, they meet again. Sexual tension en masse. Inuendo but no touching. Oooh, much fun.
Liz dreams of a young man begging for help. She hears him call and she finds him in the Outer Rim on a ghetto planet. The baddest slums ever. She has to fight her way to him and get him off the planet but she's had plenty of teachers and she knows her way around weapons now. She's a fighting machine with sexy heals. *laughs*

The boy, she knows, is Force sensitive and she feels that he has a destiny to fulfill. So they -- her manly girl-friend Ashaya -- plot a course to Yavin 4. On a stolen ship, though. And since the Jedi and the government work together, sort of, they have to impound the ship and Liz and Ashaya are taken into custody.

And Kyp watches. He stares at her at the ramp. His eyes blaze with anger. Carefully controlled. She can feel he's pissed. And she never keep staring back. Their eyes never leave each other.

This scene is my favorite actually:

Liz is in the brig, a la Star Trek. Forcefield in front and she sits on a cot, waiting. Kyp comes up and he just stands there, watching her. She watches back.

She knows what's on his mind. The questions of why.
A dialogue ensues and then:

"Oh yeah. It's what you do best, isn't it? Leaving." Kyp shrugged. "At least you had the decency to leave a note." Sarcasm leaked from his voice as he smiled begrudgingly and folded his arms in front of his chest.

Liz cleared her throat. Slowly she got up from the cot, walking towards the force field. Her heels clicked on the stone floor with every slow step she took -- a rhythm similiar to her heartbeat. "I didn't want to see the hurt in your eyes when I left. I didn't want to witness what I did to you." She sighed, letting her arms fall to her sides. "I was afraid to face you."

She smirked as she stood only centimeters away from the force field. Had it not been in the way, she would have felt his warm breath tickle her skin. She could have breathed in the spicy scent she remembered so well, the very scent that could arouse her instantly.

"Evidently now," Her eyebrows rose while she stared him down. She wasn't afraid anymore -- she'd left fear in her past. "I am not."

I'm going to have to rewrite this, I suppose. But this are parts of my notes right now and I'm loving it. Giving Liz an edginess, a bitchiness. I want her to fight with Kyp, I want them both to know that they can't leave without each other. God -- the fightscene with be hot, too!

Liz landed on the mat butt first. Her teeth clattered and the fighting stick twirled through the air, skittering across the gym floor. She stared daggers at Kyp, grinding her teeth and narrowing her eyes.

Kyp circled her, twirling the stick in his hands in a figure eight motion. "Get up." He all but snarled at her. "I know I taught you better than this."

And obviously there'll be kissing and stuff. *grins*
So much fun!

And not to forget, Lassiter will be back, too. He's even mean. Not that he wasn't mean before but this is vileness at its best. And he wants her and he'll do everything to get to her. But this time, all he wants is his revenge and he wants her to suffer.

Duh-duh-duh-duuuuuuuuuuuhhhhh.

*sighs* I'm content now.